Friday, 28 September 2012

Blog Reflection (week 5)

This week, I fell behind and missed the deadline, pretty much everyone missed the deadline. However we were able to get back on track, and get everything up to date, even though we have a bit of less time to do the other tasks. So I will not do this again, because missing deadlines are bad for us but worse for the teacher, since they have to delay the marking. Therefore I have learned my lesson from this mistake.

That's pretty much all I did this week, catching up my missed deadline. It was due for 26th, but everything was done for 28th.

Our next tasks are to do the flat plan for 2 of our products, the digipak and magazine advert. Then we will have to do the production schedule for the shooting. Therefore the last for our pre-production is call sheets and recci images. I will try my best to make sure, I meet this deadline.

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Development of Treatments for Products

Treatment for Digipak



The wilderness is a constant presence throughout our products and this will be no different. It will have an autumnal feel to with a touch of romance too. But also the idea of romance, a midst elements of pain too, because our audience believed that love becomes stronger if pain is endured to some degree. So with that in mind we will implement and juxtapose the hope of a relationship with negative themes as well. Because it is the album, then it would be worth having all the themes in there. Obviously, in a subtle way and a way that won't be too fat and crammed with content. It will not be too out-there because we aim for the balance between alternative and mainstream. Cool and sleek are the things we aim for.

THE IDEA 

The front cover will be a long shot of the hipster Boy and Girl walking on the field with a London skyline lurking in the far distance. The innocence of youth in the foreground, with the urban jungle laying as an obstacle in the background. But they're walking away from it, as if to say they don't care as long as they have each other.

The back cover can be where the negative commentary on life can be seen, because we will have a wide, establishing shot of a polluting motorway right beside a bunch of trees and the obvious connotations there are of the poisonous effects of man on nature. This will be the same motorway to forest joining that the Boy crosses in the video, in order to get to the forest. The use of nature is a central element to our artist and for it to be seen dying out is a powerful image, I'm very sure you will definitely agree with.


Like the video and advert, the digipak will have the murky green colour to it, reflecting an overcast day. Also, by sticking to our idea and what our research told us, we must keep the artist himself in the shadows. Therefore a blurred, soft-focus shot of the artist can be be put on one of the covers, so he is massively obscured, yet still there for us to see him and identify his fashion sense.

Taking inspiration from research into magazine adverts, I think having basic, no-frills font is the way forward with this because having an overly stylised font can be cheesy, and for us we want slickness, and so modern and elegant writing is necessary. This really is hipster/niche mixed with mainstream dreams. Our audience said that they'd like to see some aspirations of success from the artist and so we have decided to move forward have a few conventional looks to this digipak.

Obviously, this being a digipak, a collector's item, we need to supply the people who would buy this with special differences to the standard album. A thing I see regularly with collector's editions of things is the absence of a lot of the text. Probably because their audience knows most of it, so you don't need to patronise them with saturated information. Minimalism is the key to a digipak. The explanation of the bonus features can be left on the inside covers where the images on those covers will be of the artist in various poses. But still not quite in a recognisable way.



Treatment for Music Video


Song: Dissociation
Artist: Carl Hauck

By having a moderately tempo-ed song, indie song, this immediately configures a rough idea of what the music video will be. The song deals with a romance and so the video will be based on the relationship between a boy and a girl. We have decided to implement an element of drama as the Boy goes on a journey in search of his Girl. The video intertwines performance aspects with a narrative; because the entirety of the video is him on his walk, while singing the song simultaneously. From audience research we learnt that people will look for a narrative in a video, so it is a no-brainer in terms of including it. Our Ideal Audience Member says that the visual look of the film is imperative, therefore we must try and construct a video that has a story that is both engaging visually and thematically.

THE VIDEO

The video begins with the Boy wandering the streets of Romford market looking decidedly solemn. The mise-en-scene will be quite grey and dank, so as to reflect the low place he is in, due to the fact he is lost without his girlfriend. Then he will have a quick visualisation of his girlfriend in the woods, and suddenly he has a realisation to make this pilgrimage to the forest where he saw his girl. He now moves with conviction and begins to walk away and out Romford, singing as the lyrics now kick in.

As he walks out Romford he makes makes his way down the streets and then the motorways, through the polluted and mechanical cars that drive by, leaving the fumes to blow in his poor face. This is the Boy's rough patch. Symbolic of the toil needed to be encountered if he is to be united with his true love. I would prefer to be able to capture this on an overcast day, in order to further reinforce the toughness.

Then the song and video will come to the climax. The Boy will reach the forest; he'll enter the trees and will break into a jog, as his eyes light up with the knowledge he is nearing his target. The song segues into an instrumental finish and the music takes off into a crescendo of sound. This will be the bit where the Boy emerges from the trees onto an open green field and he'll spot his Girl in the center of the field. She's standing, waiting for him. From there they both run to each other and then embrace.

Also, our focus group unanimously agreed to the inclusion of the artist in the video. By having him appear in cut-aways, playing his guitar and singing along with the Boy. This would signify that this is a music video more clearly but whether it will make the final cut is not decided, because it may ruin the momentum and the point of it just being the Boy and Girl.

The Technicalities 

Throughout the video there will be a smorgasbord of establishing shots, in order to represent the progression his journey, and also the shots will be attractive to look at and add another dimension of interest for which to look at the video. The video will be both a visual and thematic piece of work.


We will tinker with the colour palette, thus representing the changing states of emotion. The first half are focused on darker shades of green and grey. This is his stressed state. Then as he nears the forest, the mood improves to lighter shades and the lighting will become brighter.

Lighting will be natural, thus maintaining authenticity and realism. Because we're filming on-location in busy areas, it would be impractical to carry big lights. Equipment will therefore be kept to a minimum. Restricted to a single HD camera and mobile phones for communication.

Locations will be Romford, A12 and M25 motorways, and then Epping/Hainult Forest. The use of fields are subject to change, depending on which area we deem most appropriate.

In terms of actors, we are, at the moment, inclined to have Cameron Lewis as the Boy. For he is white and relatively not ugly. Also, we are guaranteed good hours off of him and the commitment and will to do anything we tell him. As for the Girl, I think we will have Cameron's real life girlfriend playing, because therefore the chemistry between the two characters wills surely be higher and more believable with them two, rather than another actress.


Treatment for Magazine Advert


Taking into account what we have in mind for our artist and what people would expect from an artist such as this; the magazine advert is a very defining way in order for us to convey this persona.
It has developed into the concept that our artist is one not to take the limelight with both hands, like a cookie-cut popstar, instead he is the music and the music is him. Therefore he must blend into the environment, and not be a distraction. This is indie music after all, and our audience say that means he is conventionally going to be quirky. That liberates us to do what we want. His fans are hipsters, but he is not. He makes the music to appeal to them.


  THE IDEA

The idea would be to have him the middle ground of a long shot. In the foreground would be blades of grass that are out focus; then he is sat beyond the grass. He is sat on a log, dressed in a fashionable, long, blue cardigan with a scarf, fake Buddy Holly glasses, grey trousers, many wristbands and rings and a hipster hat; and he is looking down while playing the acoustic guitar. Our audience who were into indie music were known to shop and wear stylish, slick clothing. You can slightly see his face but it is angled downwards.

Beyond in the background are the trees and trademark forest. The forest has become a signature of his, as he revolves around the ideas of purity and freedom. He will be positioned slightly to the side of the shot, so as not to become a major focal point, but instead blend in; also, he will be shot on a slightly soft focus. The overall colour tone of the image will be green, like the greenery, but in a cool and overcast tone. The wilderness will blow around him. The whole image will be at an arty canted angle, reflecting the artiness of the indie alternative scene; which is known to be the case, judging by what we found via research.

The aforementioned blades of grass will take up the bottom third/bottom half of the page, because in this section of grass will be the text, telling us the name of the artist, his album and where to buy it from. And then dotted neatly around the artist will be a few critical quotes, which will comment on his emotional sensitivity and catchy indie sensibility.


The whole atmosphere is of this cool, young and handsome guy playing his acoustic guitar in the outdoors. His music catalogue is quirky enough to distinguish from those soppy acoustic-pop artists. Our character is flexible, thus allowing him to appeal to an audience of boys and girls, as that is the demographic that would be interested in something like this, according to our research.

Focus Group


This is is the video of our focus group, we got a few people to take part. They were pretty good and it wasn't too boring.


Analysis
Our discussion was useful and interesting, to a degree. With nudges in the right direction we found useful information about how to develop our ideas. What was a worry was the fear of alienating a male audience by having a romance video that edged to far to appealing just to women. That is something we absolutely, fundamentally do not want; so for the boys to say they would be interested in the video, then that is positive for us. The boys also said that an attractive female is a good thing to include, so that would something to include. What was interesting was the insistence on having a video that is different to things we have already seen before. That would be challenging because our idea is quite conventional, so having a genre-bending product will be a stretch, but we will now try to be innovative and creative with certain things.

 Concerning the idea itself, the group seemed to enjoy the whole idea of the Boy finding his Girl and didn't seem to disappointed by it. Even if they had been, we would have known to ourselves that we can create something worth being different to what they've seen before. They liked the indie scene, and being young people, this provides reinforcement to the idea that young people of all backgrounds are into this alternative, all-encompassing scene; because we had a mix of ethnicities and cultures. They also seemed to like Ed Sheeran , who was one of the people we had as a similar artist to ours.

 Overall, the focus group was positive and encouraging and hasn't deterred us massively from our initial idea. Instead it has developed it and evolved into a tangible and realistic product.

Tuesday, 25 September 2012

Audience Research (Ideal Audience Member)

After releasing our survey onto Facebook and other mediums, we then analysed the results and came to a rough idea of what our ideal audience member would be. The results were varied, given we live in a very diverse area and my facebook friends are likewise. There was a real scatter of tastes and therefore, I believe, we don't live in an area where indie music will really thrive. Because, if I had to pick a dominant genre, it would be the hip-hop genre; therefore a greater emphasis on working class attitudes and fashion sense. But there were some people who I thought were perfect for our song and artist, and they tended to come from the home counties mostly. We already had the rough idea of what our audience were and this supported our idea.

Ideal Audience Member Profile

Name: Charlie Morgan

Charlie is a 18 year old male university student of English Literature, and comes from Braintree in Essex. He loves indie music and it's his favourite genre and it really has become part of his of life. He is very popular in his circle of friends due to his quirky and eccentric personality. This means he is on all the social networks, and so when he sees or hears something that piques his interest, he will tweet/facebook about it without hesitation; spreading the word to his many, many associates.
With all of that, Charlie proudly is a self-proclaimed hipster, and he watches music videos for their artistic concepts and whether they excite us visually, or move us via a narrative. He does not care for the vanity project of over-indulgent pop pretensions, even though he does put a lot of effort into his own appearance.
Being such a popular guy with high eccentricity means Charlie is the stereotypical middle-class quirky hipster, therefore he has a bit more money than the regular person, and so he can shop regularly at places like TopShop. But also goes for alternative looks at places such as Camden.


Saturday, 22 September 2012

Blog Reflection (week 4)

This week, Aran and I did our job allocation. So we decided which jobs we were going to do between us, within pre-production, production and post-production. Then we made a table, for our reference and so we don't forget. Then we done the pinterest board, this shows a rough idea of what our music video might be like and it is a representation of our artist.

Then in Mr Clarke's lessons, we were learning about conventions of a music video, which would also help us to do our music video analysis. Furthermore, we learnt about the conventions for a magazine advert, this will also help us to do our magazine advert analysis.

So what I have left to do for next week is, my analysis of the 3 digipaks, the 1 magazine advert and the 1 music video. Then we have to do our focus group and analyse the feedback. Therefore the final thing to do for next week would be the treatment for our 3 products. We also have our audience research and audience profile to do as well. So I must get a move on.

Thursday, 20 September 2012

Job Allocation

Me and Aran, have sat down and discussed the jobs at hand. So we have come to an agreement, this table beneath is the allocated jobs we must carry out.

Tuesday, 18 September 2012

Pinterest

Here is a rough idea of our music video and our artist. Its images and videos that are associated with our idea, so you can get a feel or a taste of what is to come.

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Saturday, 15 September 2012

Blog Reflection (week 3)

This week we were formally introduced to the digipaks. We were told that we would have to analyse them and then make our own one, on the computer. We were shown professional and student digipaks, to get an idea of the whole deal.

We were also lectured about audience research, we would have to make a questionnaire on survey monkey and post it on a social networking site for people to answer, then analyse the feedback. Furthermore, we would have to do a focus group with our target audience.

Adding to this, there is also the task of analysing music videos and magazine covers, because we would also have to make our own magazine cover.

Near the end of the week, I started my digipak analysis, which I'm still working on. But I have mostly been tidying up my blog, because there's a few bits and pieces that need to be in place. Apart from that, everything is fine and well.

Sunday, 9 September 2012

Blog Reflection (week 2)

I have decided to work with Aran and use his ideas. We decided to use his idea, because he had got the permission, whereas my unsigned artist hadn't replied and still hasn't replied. So it was the sensible thing to do. But I also like his idea, the whole natural feel, because most of it will be in the forest. Also, indie music is a growing genre today, more people have become interested in this genre.

Here is Aran's idea in a nutshell. However, he had to change the song after this, because the old artist he emailed to, didn't reply. So he emailed to a different artist who gave him permission.

Here is the permission for his song:


This is the song, and it is called "Dissociation" - http://www.unsigned.com/carlhauck


Hopefully, we can pull this idea off with no problems, to make sure we can get this work done to the best of our abilities, this includes, pre-production, production and post-production.

My fears would be not getting things done on time and falling back. Also not doing work with the best quality.

Everything seems good so far, so let see how things go from here...

Saturday, 8 September 2012

Music Video Pitch

The Presentation
This is the presentation I made for the pitch of my music video idea, it explains my idea in detail.


The Pitch
I was also being recorded while I was presenting, then I was given feedback from the rest of the class about my idea.



Feedback
After I done my pitch, I was given feedback from my classmates and my teacher.



Feedback Analysis
Everyone liked my idea, however they thought the location was not appropriate. My original location was central London, but they said East London would more suit the song choice. So if I am going to use this song for my music video, I would use more of an urban location, such as hackney or romford. They also asked if I could, to change the song, they said find a similar song. If i were to change the song, I would definitely have to go for a very similar song, in the same genre, because my idea would only suit this type of music.